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Tuesday, 30 March 2021

Year six's away smoothie day

 


In week 7 it was only year 5 in our class because all the year 6's were on camp 
so we did lot of fun thing's. What you have seen in the slide's are all the cool fun 
thing that we when the year 6's were gone. My favourite thing that we did when they were gone was making smoothie and drinking them. 

3 comments:

  1. I loved finding out about your week! I especially liked how you titled: Soccer with Seba. The last paragraph on the last slide didn't make that much sence. Betsy

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  2. Hi Lila, I like how you have put detail in your work. Everything you put in your recount I remember doing it. It's so good writing. If you can fix up the order the slides go in, it will make more sense.

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  3. Kia Ora Lila, I liked all of your blog post but my favorite bit is when you told me about how you made the smoothie it sounded really fun. It reminded me the time I was making a smoothie and I forgot to put the lid on and I made a massive mess.

    The way you described the boat making it sounded hard & easy at the same time. What was it like shoveling up chicken poo, it sounds really gross. Well over all I think you and the year fives had a great week.

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